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The Canvas of My Heart

A masterpiece, created of love;
each brushstroke made with care.
Every fiber of your tender bristles
touching the palette to share.


 

Molded like potter's clay
into your warm and gentle hands;
spinning dizzy on your ever wheel
from far across the lands.


 

Like a perfect wooden carving
etched with intricate beauty;
soft but strong within your grasp
as I'll always wish to be.


 

A rainbow of color in every smile;
your words - new feelings you impart.
You have painted all the riches
upon the canvas of my heart.

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  • kaziangel
    July 14
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    i love it keep writing sister
  • Oh my goodness! This poem is truly beautiful It made me smile whilst readin through, thankyou so much for this wonderful poem you have made my day xx
  • penStock
    June 29

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    (Some homepages are like stepping into revered cathedrals. I like what little I know of Paganism ie:the origin of halloween).
    I don't know how to do a verdict, so I'll stick with a review:
    The title grabbed me with the selection of the word "canvas" in this context. The tender texture stays throughout. The bd rhyme scheme returns softly in position. And your 2 end lines firmly catch in place, bringing the sentiments home.

  • Rovingone gold member
    June 14

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    So sweet. What a compelling piece this is. You just make the heart start a flutterin'! Who ever he is, he bettr appreciate you. Just beautiful!
    You have painted all the riches
    upon the canvas of my heart.

    Perfect ending.


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      June 14
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      Thanks hun, appreciate your comments. I can only hope that appreciation is there.

      Storm

  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 13

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    Wow,

    You know what sis, you deserve one of the best guys that this poor planet has to offer.. You are so romantic, sensual, and passionate about love. Thanks for bringing many inspiration through your wonderfully crafted lines of poetic art from your lovely heart. Peace, and know I love ya. Your brother, Timothy

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