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God's secret~

God's secret
This joy of consciousness
between you and I~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Bruce silver member
    January 15

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    I'm discovering many treasures among your poems. You have a beautiful sensitivity to the nuances of language and emotion.

    • Amarige
      January 15
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      Thank you so much dear, your comments are so beautiful!


  • Aerden gold member
    June 15, 2008

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    I am so glad this won! I'd have been very disappointed if it hadn't.


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    June 15, 2008

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    Congratulations Ruby!

    Yep' like I said... 'summed up perfectly in ten words'

    Well deserved.

    Sol


  • GypsyEyes
    June 14, 2008

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    this was a very beautiful write! you have expressed your self very well! i wish you all the best of luck in the contest!
    ~NeeCee


  • Jalalbad gold member
    June 14, 2008
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    What a beautiful prase! I wish you luck in contest


  • Roaddog Wolf
    June 14, 2008
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    Now this would be

    truly a level to which two people build loves relationship on very good take on the prompt.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    June 14, 2008
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    I call this intimacy lol and good luck in the contest.

    • Amarige
      June 14, 2008
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      That is what we want it to be ..Thank you
      Ruby


  • islekine gold member
    June 14, 2008
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    Wow...Gold in my book!!

    Best wishes in the contest..
    Write on!

  • mr cheeseydude
    June 14, 2008

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    The aspect of a higher power behind love gives love a celestial feel behind it, accented by the celestial picture you have above the poem.

    Readers can really feel the "joy" from this poem, and I believe everyone, whether they believe in God or not, can appreciate the beauty of a celestial concept.

    Good job and good luck!


  • peridotPixi
    June 14, 2008

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    i really love the other picture you have used on this poem it helps tell so many feelings and shows exsactly what you mean, this poem is nice flowing and wonderfuly thought out, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


  • DarkStatic
    June 14, 2008
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    it's pretty awesome. I like it a lot!


  • Aerden gold member
    June 14, 2008
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    I like this--it resembles a haiku in its beauty, truth, and simplicity.


  • craftyangel43
    June 14, 2008
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    Beautiful...I like the image this gives me.
    Good job

  • U.g.l.y.
    June 14, 2008

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    Conceiving love as a god's creation. I'm irreligious, but it's always nice to feel blessed when you're in love, making it more joyful for the couple.


  • Unsigned gold member
    June 14, 2008
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    Wonderful...


    I really love the images this brings..

    Well done

    Simon


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 13, 2008
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    So secret is revealed by your deep poetry...well done..


  • paulcreates silver member
    June 13, 2008
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    I give these ten words a score of ten.

    Paul


  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    June 13, 2008
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    your words are of sweet tender D: short but awesommme i love these 10 words allot


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    June 13, 2008
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    Summed up perfectly in ten words.

    Beautiful

    Sol

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