Intravenous poison
Intended to be a remedy
Makes one vomit
13:06:08
A contest entry
- 500 points for 10 words by Unsigned.
950 points, ended June 15, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ooooo i know this right now...... i like this.... it was in my masters contest..... i think you did a good job on this..... thanks for sharing...!
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Yikes. Now that's love-sick.
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whooaa
kind of rough on the love dept. but then I thought of what you were saying, perhaps the poison being due to it be a remedy and therefore for the wrong reason ?!
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makes me vomit
i love that line
very good write!
i really enjoyed it
i wish you the best of luck in the contest!
~NeeCee -
Savour the difference lol
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This is a very strange take!
Were we looking at the same picture???????lol
Best wishes in the contest...
Write on!
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This was definitely a cynical view on love. Don't get me wrong; I'm typically a huge cynic myself, so that was actually a compliment.
However, I'm not sure this is a contest in which one will get too many points with the judge by being different.
Good luck!
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i really love how you have used a different take on this prompt i love how the poision is causing issues, i think this says so much in a few wonderfully thought out words, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Hmm don't quite get it but still nicely done!
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Yeah, I've heard vancomycin has that effect on some people. (g) I like the fact that it is at least not another mushy love poem.
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Hhmmmmmm
Lost for words here. good luck.
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Someone doesn't like the idea of love, huh? A pretty dark write... it reveals the sincere feelings of the writer, and maybe I share them, but for now I prefer to be a cynic.
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ok...
Thanks for the entry
Simon
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