Kind to the bone, warrior at heart,
Sense of humor, and so darn smart.
Jolly on the spot always for her friend,
Deep down I know on her I can depend.
Soul mates wandering through lifes big screen,
Never met her, her face I've never seen.
I would know her anywhere, I just know in my mind,
A friend for life, the best I could have hoped to find.
Whenever I'm sad, you always lend me a smile,
Friends forever, I think I will keep you awhile.
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For My friend Warrior7
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thats so cute i can realte to that poem....gud job
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Nice Line!!
Soul mates wandering through lifes big screen
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Best friends over the internet, that is pretty dang cool! Congrats on having found eachother across all the miles. Have you ever thought about actually meeting in person?
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Nice write
A great tribute to your friendship.
Nevadapoet -
love it
i started to comment and it became a poem, you moved me -
i love this poem!
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nice poem
I don't know if you are speaking of the friend within or not but That's what I got be true to yourself. You can always rely on and trust yourself.
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just wonderful
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Re: Friends for Life
Very good poem! I like it! It's sentiments and emotion are so familiar and so pertinent. I can identify with the emotions and feelings you presented! Great title. Good rhymes. Good construction. Nothing forced. Good rhymed poetry and well done, well worded!
I can't think of any improvements to suggest! I like the title and your beginning and ending lines are very good. This is darn good poetry!
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Thanks for the welcome...I instantly wanted to read this poem because friendship means ALOT to me and it was worth it...This poem was pure simple and everyones wish..nicely done...
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this is cuteiful!
this poem is so sweet and touching....FIVE STARS 3 APPLAUSES! -
I love this It makes me think of my best friend! I love the last two lines, It's a great read
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Sweet!
How sweet! I especially love the last two lines - I suppose with a friend like you, Warrior7 will keep you for a while, as well! =) Well done!
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Kind to the bone, warrior at heart,
Sense of humor, and so darn smart.
Jolly on the spot always for her friend,
Deep down I know on her I can depend.
Soul mates wandering through lifes big screen,
Never met her, her face I've never seen.
Good Write keep up the good lines.
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Since your a true poet I'm gone put you on to this not everyone will see it:
www.geocities.com/soul.poetry
The Only Real Poetry, Is Soul Poetry
Only Real Poets Come To A Place Like This, SO DONT WASTE YOUR TIME!
Soul Poetry is a non-profit organization out there to help others to just get the word out. And not screw everyone else over like poetry. com has done over so many years. Telling everyone that there poem has won a contest that never exsisted. And telling them to buy their book for $50 or more. But see our book is free. You don’t pay for nothing. I pay out of my own pocket. What is their to loose? I can’t really steal your poetry what would I use it for?
Soul Poetry is commited for poets. It was made by poets, for poets, and it is published by poets. Every poet knows that they want to get their word out to someone. So why not start here. This organization is still small but it will grow over time. We need decicated poets and writers like yourself. To help us grow. All I need is 200 poems to publish in our first book. Each poet will have their own page to use. For their poem, and a small biography giving them a little background information about yourself.
So what do you say, is your poetry... Soul Poetry??
If you have any questions you can e-mail me at putdubsonit@yahoo.com -
Oh my, I know she must be very tickled with this poem, awesome words you've penned for a freind / matie
Best wishes and all my hugsssss always
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gobsmacking
i see you know each other very well..
your use of desciption in so few words is increadable!
I have read it 5 times and I feel I know you quite well now, but I cannot stop hearing this question screaming at me...
have never met this soul mate??...WOW!!!
trev x x x
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very touching honestly i know the feeling and it reached out to me its a tad short but a good read keep it up and thanks for the comment made me feel good i got tones moew coming so drop in every now and again
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WOW!
Nice tribute to your friend! I thought the rhyme was just perfect from start to finish. You have a gift for poetry. THANKS!!!
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I loved it. It reminds me of every last one of my friends . My favorite was line 2. The whole poem was clever. Great write.
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Aww, so sweet. I like this poem very much. The simplicity of it reminds me of so many friendships I have.
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Excellent
What a perfectly penned piece of poetry Queen.
Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us.
*S* Cynthia
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Did not think you could be so good.
She-Pirate Captain: I thought you were a good for nothing Pirate, but you blossom out to be a real attractive person with a free mind. Heart felt wishes to you. -
ah to know someone's spirit we do not have to view their face, i remember one of my friends saying to me the people online are not real, i tried explaining to him he was wrong but he was adamant with his opinion, i guess those of us who make friends online and those who do not know online life and friendship are different. it is good to make friends whatever way - a good poem.
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wow this is awsome i relly like it and thax for the commint but wow u cant even explan this good job
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I had to come back and read this because it really has made my month i can tell you
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Oh mate was not expecting to log on and read this, This is beautiful and you know i love it. Your a friend that i'm never going to let go of.
Thank you Barb this means everything to me 
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