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Inside My Mind

In my mind I feel the blast
my words like dynamite,
a limited vocabulary
yet I try to explain it right.
There's much I need to say,
counting down a fast paced tone,
I stutter uncontrollably
until my words have blown.
an explosion of the mind,
I'm confused with the unknown.

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    June 22, 2008

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    There is a quick pace in this that fits the content and meaning of the words. Well done and well chosen words for the prompt. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm