one single warhead
twenty megatons of sun
eclipses the earth
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10 words
A contest entry
- 500 points for 10 words by Unsigned.
950 points, ended June 15, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Now this is original. Well done.
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You really
took the prompt out of the box with a very interesting twist, well done. We do have a choice love or war, wonder which man will choose, he only need choose the wrong one once. Let's hope not. Good write.
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hey love is a war i am all for fighting for! lol well this is a very good write! beautifully penned! i wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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Interesting take on the prompt!!
Best wishes in the contest...
Write on!
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Hmmm...love or war? However, isn't love like a war in many regards?
The intensity of the words really helps to symbolize the intensity of love for a mate. It's a very powerful poem.
Good luck!
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i really love your take on the prompt its deffinatly creative, i love how you have used eclipses the earth, i do belive that earth should be capitilized if you care sometimes i dont care about my gramer in short poems like this, good flow with great detials, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Oh god Karl..very powerful ...you made me laugh though about 'megatons of sun'
..you want create big fire or what..hehee..good luck..dear
Ruby
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Wow...I just read someone else's comment--so now I'm wondering if this is a poem about nuclear war or if it's a really unusual metaphor for the power of love. I can honestly say that I have no idea. (g) Best of luck in the contest!
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Powerful words. Nice!
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Very different, but yet very strong words.
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You screwed me. I can't get the real meaning beyond these words, but they are strong... indeed, showing love as a more-than-natural strength.
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Interesting 10 words....
Good luck
Simon
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A hardy ten words, full of immensity lol and good luck in the contest lol
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