Passionate souls
entwine,
forever dancing
on cloud nine,
Soul Searching!
Author notes
10 words
A contest entry
- 500 points for 10 words by Unsigned.
950 points, ended June 15, 2008, 20 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well deserved for the trophy. nice job!
Ruby
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Wow.
Great poem I enjoy the feeling you put into it.
Good Luck
Alex.
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Great rhyme and flow.
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LOL.....very original. I like this alot.
It brought butterflies to my stomach. A cute/good write. I wish you luck! 
~Kystal Angel
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Good write
I could feel the enthusiasm you have written thus with, passionate, thanks for sharing.
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so this was pretty flipping amazing! you did a great job! i love the cloud nine bit! i wish you the best of luck in the contest!
~NeeCee
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This is a great 10 words!
Best wishes in the contest!
Write on....
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The font is very fancy. Hahahaha.
I like this: it's sensual and almost ecstatic. It really places the reader in this feeling of security and comfort.
I don't really like the exclamation point, but if that's the only thing bad I can say about it, you've obviously done a great job!
Good luck!
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That's a wrap; you did this wonderfully lol and good luck in the contest.
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i love how you have used the souls entwine, and how you have made it rhyme with forever dancing on cloud nine, i really like the detials you have used here, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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This definitely conveys emotion. I enjoyed reading it.
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really beautiful well done!
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Very beautiful...great job
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Soul searching? With a writing like this, I'd rather go hunting (Sorry for the word I used) or trying to get some... this inspires me to go on.
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Pretty good
Well you will be happy to know that you stopped the vote happening..
This is really very well written
Thanks
Simon
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Perfecto~
Many of us need to be doing the same thing.
Wonderfully inscribed. I love ya.
-Timothy
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Nicely done excellent flow and imagery for 10 words. Love you...Scott
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Dancing on cloud nine...awwwwwwww how I love this image you're painting here
XXJeannette
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Good work
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