A kiss goodbye
is tender and hearfelt;
filled with promise.
Author notes
A kiss goodbye only 10 words allowed so only 10 words it is.
A contest entry
- 500 points for 10 words by Unsigned.
950 points, ended June 15, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very Beautiful
Ah yes good byes between lovers can be many things. Hopefully they will be filled with promises to be kept. Wonderful poem. Take care, Sandy
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Indeed. Yeah I agree with you. Thank you for your comment!
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Awesome Write, I really enjoy the emotion put into your poem.
Best of Luck
Alex.
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Thank you I'nm glad you liked what I did with it!
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Promise to ruturn I take it. Well done.
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It can be whatever you read into it
Thank you!
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Aaawwww.
I wanna a kiss like that! *looks for a stranger* Dang...no one around. *cries* This is beautifully sad. I wish you luck!
~Kystal angel
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Heh I think everyone would like a kiss like that. Thank you!
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aaww it kinda makes me a little sad but regardless this poem it beautiful! i wish you the best of luck in the contest!
~NeeCee
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Thank you; don't think I'll win since I broke one of the rules but still that doesn't matter
Thanks anyhow.
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This is a nice poem...
But you used "kiss"?????
Best wishes...
*PEACE* -
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Heh yeah woopsie...oh well it's done now.
Thanks!
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I believe "kiss" was on the list of words that aren't allowed in the contest.
However, this is very touching and romantic. You have the rare, yet fantastic ability to shove a lot of feeling into a small amount of words.
Congratulations!
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Yeah the silly little twit that I am I only just noticed and am now kicking myself. Oh well.
Thanks anyhow!
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The promise of more love to come, for true; good luck in the contest lol
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Thanks! I'm glad it was liked!
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i really like how you have used this kiss goodbye to say so much allthough kiss was a word asked not to be used, thats allright i still get a wonderful feeling from this great poem, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Heh I only just noticed that... I guess that's what happens when you write a poem before going to bed
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Nice take on the prompt indeed. I hate goodbyes but this was wonderfuly said..best of luck
Ruby
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Thanks. I'm glad you liked it!
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I think the phrase 'filled with promise' makes this poem. Best of luck in the contest!
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Thank you. I thought long and hard on the perfect line to finish it and i do think I managed it.
Thanks again!
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Yet a kiss good bye is not complete until there is a hug welcome back. Nice write, encouraging commitment and other values of love.
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Thank you I'm glad it worked!
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Very good write and very true.
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Thank you!
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Yes how true...
but a kiss hello says so much as well...
Simon
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indeed it does. I just tend to write depressing things
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