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~Shivers~

Salivating fear, pores wreaking evil
as razor sharp fingernails rip through moist flesh.

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Pic: http://www.uncrate.com/men/images/2007/09/cujo.jpg

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  • crimsondew
    June 17, 2008
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    Eww....Wonderful dark write...Congrats on the gold!


  • Gypsie Ink
    June 16, 2008

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    Ick!

    In the best gross way! I really like "pores wreaking evil" Nice write! Thank you for your entry and Best of luck!

  • imahealer
    June 13, 2008

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    Gruesome is a great word to describe this verse. Cujo! Read that book. Gave me nightmares! I entered her Friday "Rain" contest! LOL Thirteen thrilling, terrifying words! Best wishes!
    Love you,
    Linda