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The Club (Part 1)

Sultry and seductive, I grab you by the hand;
We arrive at the dance floor
A favourite tune; fueled by our favourite liquor
Smiling bright under the lights; shining, changing colours
Step back and watch your hips wine to the rhythm
Sweat drips off your shoulder
Unbutton the top of my expensive shirt
I walk back closer to you
Arm around your waist; my leg in between yours
The music gets louder, the crowd grows larger
Our bodies are pressed together even further
To us, everyone else is invisible
Your exotic little black dress
Teases and excites beyond imagination
As my hands run all over your body
To the beat of the favourite tune
As you turn around, large behind in front of me
Hypnotic grinding puts me in a trance; dance
Slowly something hard begins to grow in my jeans
As you drop down low, I accidentally tug on the material
Panty-less, bare-skinned; just for me
Stunned, I am almost fully hardened
The hand on your waist still stays on your waist
Just under your skirt I’ve moved my hand
If anyone was paying attention to us, they would see
Your treasure cove; nicely shaven
I slowly lower my hand towards the treasure
As you turn around and nod at me; devilishly
You pull me close, facing towards you
As you reach down and tug on the zipper below
Once it is all the way down, you reach inside
The front opening of my boxers; rock
You pull it thru the opening of my jeans
Luckily you were close; my snake would have been exposed
Once it is pulled out, you turn your back to me again
And continue your hypnotist routine; bubbling
My seven inch rod, in the middle of the cheeks below you
Warm, erotic, sensual, sweaty
As I wrap both arms around you; caressing
Your chest, your hips, the outskirts of your cove
My stiff member thrusts against the outer wall
Not finding its way inside; teasing
As you feel it pulse, I begin to feel slight wetness
Turned on even more, we continue to dance away
As the song comes to a close, I keep my arms around you
As we walk back over to our private VIP booth
Where no one can see but us…

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  • Travel Notes
    June 19, 2008
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    This turned me on so much. I love it, so teasing and dangerous. I'm going to look for part 2 now!

  • voluptoussheila
    June 18, 2008
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    hot...hot...hot..gr8 imagery...sensual and seductive....cant wait for part2!


  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    Omg wow. So wet and throbbing lusting for an experience like this. You have a talent for erotica's. Love the fact that you kept it to only teasing because someone once told me "the build up is the best part". Mmmm wow im still shaking lol. Keep up the great writes. ~ Brook

  • limechic
    June 13, 2008
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    awesome...whats the word im looking for...adventurous, riske. waiting for part 2 =)


  • Shandie
    June 13, 2008

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    wow. i really liked this one you are really good and the erotic poems. you have alot of energy inside of you seems like waiting to come out.

  • Anyajoellienne
    June 13, 2008

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    mellow and daring
    seductive, interesting
    leads to picking a favorite jam
    and going from there

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