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my lover my heaven

Embracing with wings enfolded our love forbidden.
A curse on you and blessing me separates us forever.
We met when all were innocent and knew we would be in love always.
In purgatory we meet and share time suffering and finding pleasure in each kiss.

One trip for each rebellious sin.
To have a heart and have to deny it.
Not choosing to love you but unable to resist.

Finally knowing i will be damned forever.
I choose you over paradise.
You are my heaven.

Always with wings singed as i fly to you always.

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  • rainyday woman silver member
    June 13, 2008

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    I enjoyed your piece very much, you were one of the few how came close to what my thoughts were on this picture. Thank you very much for entering and sharing your take on "gothic angel and deamon"
    Cheryl


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    June 13, 2008

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    A love greater than anything...so deeply touching this is...best wishes and many blessings!