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barefooted

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this beautiful waste
falls open
 
edges spill sideways
 
and we empty back to full,
bare feet pressed to a covered
sky.
 
there are no harbingers,
no heralds
                 [ of what was,
                                  or what might be ]
 
just the endless of a moment
before the end,
a softening of shell as fragments tremble,
as everything crawls
 
away,
 
 
as the centre flees pale shadows
that once tasted green-
limbs that weighed over us ...
 
the ground is hard in seasons
such as these
 
and our water so brittle
 

 

 
 
 
 

 
anointed, we slip

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Note for concerned friends - I am fine, this is just a memory of once.

Edits: 3

Image Credit: http://angelreich.deviantart.com/art/Structure-of-Simplicity-22072469

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  • Grunts Girl
    June 22

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    so sad even if just a memory of once was....
    what we expirience does make us stronger and you are a true test of that

  • I think I actually felt the slip in the last line.
    Amazing.

    - Never ♥.

  • ecrivain01 silver member
    June 16
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    Intrguing write ...


  • Faithbound gold member
    June 13

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    Another great write. There is never anything critical to tell you.


  • Rowan gold member
    June 13

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    Phewww... lol.
    I'm so glad this is past; though this is depression
    written finer than I could ever express it. Very moving.

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