Here she goes again
Screaming and Shouting
Preying to God, Amen
I begin doubting
Am i her child?
Am i another?
I cant find a file
Finding my mother
I don't belong here
Im an outcast
Sitting in tears
I want to know my past
I'm too weird
The regect
My soul so smeared
My Mind incorrect
She shouts and screams
Makes me so alone
Infects my dreams
Here I am Disown
Author notes
i have had a feeling deep down for years that i was adopted... i can find no evidence of it.. but i dont belong in this family
christine sands
Xx Silkehs Wifeh xX
A contest entry
- Raw Emotion by loving.a.soldier.
600 points, ended June 27, 2008, 26 entries
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Great Write!! Deep and I hope things get better
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would make an amazing song, i think
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"infects my dreams" Great write...deep and powerful. Hope things get better for ya. I can relate...tho i knew i was not adopted...i look like everyone in my family...just figured God made a mistake, i guess. but things did get better...and i know they will for you to
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Oh how so many of us feel that way. Whether it be mother or father that put us down; it happens. When it does we do tend to feel like rejects; like we dont belong. I can relate to this so I love this poem
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aww! I am so sorry. That must be an awful feeling. I couldn't even imagine. I hope one day you find the answers you're seeking. Great write though! Good luck and thank you for entering
The One and Only...
~Lynn Jones
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