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[ I crave your advice. ]

I crave your advice.
Knowing you understand.
That im not the only one.
Who ever felt this way.

Who ever felt...
Like the living dead.
The one thing thats...
not quite right.

You get it.
You get me.
You even.
saved my life.

You helped me.
And I just needed a way...
To say....
thanks......

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Um...this is just for a really great friend. Sarah.

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  • PoetryDove
    June 13, 2008

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    I'm like...speechless.

    You wrote such a beautiful poem, I'm not even kidding. I think it might even be the best.
    It's definitely different from what you usually write.

    I'm so happy that I could help, because if the world ever lost you, it'd completely suck. And if I ever lost my one && only daughter..yeah...not good

    "I crave your advice.
    Knowing you understand.
    That im not the only one.
    Who ever felt this way."

    ~ you started it out with such a beautiful first stanza. And I love this poem all together.
    It's a big piece of you.

    Everyone has tough times and I believe a lot of people have it worse than others. Some of us just aren't the lucky few that get free-tickets/passes throughout our whole lives! (which makes it a bit tougher)
    We can make the tough times an oportunity though.
    It's like this... all the sh*t we ever go through only makes us stronger.

    This poem means so much to me because you've opened so many doors in my mind ~ you make me think about a lot of things, and you've helped me, too.

    Great poem, hun!
    I loved it and I seriously do think that this has been one of your best.

    Much love from your AP momma'
    sarah ~ (podo)