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Time on my hands

Life never was very simple
We always knew that, didn't we?

Look at my hand, see the pathways and ridges
Time seems to be on my hands,
Where should we go?
Anywhere is good enough.

Life never was very simple
We always knew that, didn't we?

Am I fading away?
You shake your head, how are you so sure?
Should we take this path?
Grip me tight and guide me through hazardous waves.

Life never was very simple
We always knew that, didn't we?

Take my hand, time is on our hands
All the time in the world,
Let's spend this night together
From now until forever.

Life never was very simple
We always knew that, didn't we?

Author notes

partially inspired by the veronicas - hook me up

A contest entry

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  • AngelicMistress gold member
    June 16, 2008

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    Hi poet:

     

    This piece is very tender and in a way somewhat sad.....

    I thank you for your entry, and wish the best of luck.....

    Blessed be,

    AngelicMistress...Tanya