I'm caught somewhere in limbo
At least that's how it seems
Not sure if it's a nightmare
Or one of my other dreams
Don't know who I can pray to
What master holds the key
If it's a test, Oh, please,
Won't someone set me free.
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie... Qoute Prompt by Angelflower.
609 points, ended June 21, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was wonderfully written.. This flowed so well.. It seemed flawless... And the imagery was wonderful too.. Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck.
Angel
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nice ...I like the structure and the way it moves so flawless across the tongue..
Simon -
Great write for the prompt! Very nice rhyme and flow. Well done.
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Nope... you're doomed forever to be trapped in AP purgatory! (LOL)... great write to the prompt! You keep betting better and better...
Ken
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Very good! Great rhyme and delivery. And, you made a strong statement on emotions with very few words. Excellent.
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