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Undying Love

Although miles separate us, love conquers all
It's an adrenaline kick to fight to the end
Allows us to be proud and stand tall
And show what we truly believe in

When I look in your eyes, I see your passion
Deep down we both feel it's meant to be
There's no reason to ruin what's lasting
To only destroy our destiny

In a moment our bond grows abruptly
Just seeing you puts a smile on my face
You make me feel warm and all bubbly
We can't let this chance go to waste

How many times does true love come around?
My love is you and I won't let it go
For me it's the first time true love has been found
I'll be damned if I don't let it show

So I devote to you my undying love
For no underlined reasoning, but for you being you
I'll keep trying when the going gets tough
Because being with you is all I want to do

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To the girl I love

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  • sweetgurl
    June 17, 2008

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    Lovely

    Awww this is beautiful. Very well written. I really enjoyed reading it and feel that I can relate to it as well. Whomever you wrote this for is indeed a lucky girl. Hope everything works out! God Bless and take care!

    ~Katie


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 13, 2008
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    Awesome!

    I enjoy the fact that my boy has some fight in him, and what better reason than a maybe once in a chance lifetime love. I admire your devotion, and I'm always pulling for you when it has something to do with putting a smile on your face, and making your spirit soar forevermore. Much love Son, your pops, poeticweaver~


  • hollywood.
    June 13, 2008

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    this is beautiful...
    shes a very lucky girl =]
    its hard to be apart from the one you love...
    I know.
    Great write, hubby!

    -nessa