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She wanders...



Tears fall through lifeless fingers

 

Her rotting mouth opens,

                        

                                    ~Silence~

                                    

                                                SCREAMS!

 

"A spiritless soul trapped.

 

Heaven and Hades

                   lock their door.

 

This feral waif wanders

                         ~ alone~

                                  forever more..."
 

                     
 

Author notes

"I'm on the edge of either Hell or Heaven and neither God nor the Devil will let me go."
by NoniWang


Went the other way with this I know but it is personal....

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  • Rowan gold member
    June 21, 2008
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    Congratulations, very intense.


  • Angelflower
    June 21, 2008
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    You did a really good job here..
    And who cares if you went the other way with it. You did one hell of a job.. I really liked the intensity that you put into this piece..Personal, though? I'm sorry to hear that.. I hope that things get better.. Thank you very much for sharing and best of luck..

    Angel


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    June 13, 2008
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    ohhh gave me such a chill lol, awesome writing


    Cin


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    June 13, 2008

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    aww dad this is really good, i love this,
    you did a brilliant job here, and i lvoe it,
    best of luck, all my love,
    kitty xxx i love you dad