The innocence
of childhood
should never
be disturbed.
Fairy dreams
last forever.
Children grow
glitter dulls
blueberry dreams
fade away.
Fairy dreams
last forever.
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Clear and pretty, too- can't beat that combo!
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Love the border around
this precious poem and it is indeed a precious poem you have written here it says tons for childhood dreams that growing old seems to strip away from us all, yet some just remain. LOVE this one
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The background is lovely. your words are well set upon the scene. I wonder what she is dreaming.
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A lovely write and presentation. Magical. Good flow and tone. Well penned and much enjoyed.
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Simple
Everyone has dreams. We put the energy we want into them. As a Metis everything is joined together, we are all related and our dreams is just another connection we have with our universe. -
four stanzas. four statements which would stand alone
on their own merit. Together they are beautiful. Oh, I forgot manly men dont say pretty words. smile. But what do I know. I think I am a Rustynite. grin.
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Oh my dear and precious friend. This poem is so beautiful. The beginning line is so true, yet unfortunately not adhered to. And also such a shame that some people leave the child they were behind, and get lost in the trappings of the adult world. Us good bad girls, as well as some others, have kept a hold on the child within their heart. Awesome write. I am so glad to see you posting again! I am looking forward to more!
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