I wake into a bright blue world
And my feelings of love unfurl.
Your hazel eyes cloud my vision
Your heart, nothing like envisioned.
As I stroll through these rich and beautiful lands
I know, the test of time,
Our love shall withstand.
Within this feeling of happiness my heart doth' chime.
For its within you, beauty I do find.
Because there is no fairer in all of mand kind.
Wandering on through your heart,
And dazed throughout this dream
I wish for us to never be apart.
Out of happiness my heart does scream,
For I realize its with you that I'm complete.
And when you say "I Love You" so my eyes do gleam.
When I wake, beside me as it seems
Only to realize, as it was, just
The Sweetest Dream.
what do you think?????
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Many A Night,
I have dreamed almost the same of another. Having felt accordingly I can relate to the beauty of this offering. Well Written!!!
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This was nice and sweet with a great flow. I enjoyed this read
Out of happiness my heart does scream,
For I realize its with you that I'm complete.
And when you say "I Love You" so my eyes do gleam.
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Beautiful Sentiments, Poet!!!
So sweet and innocent. Life can be lovely at times. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you!! Wishing you the very best in life!!! Peace, Cyn 
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If only all dreams could be so sweet because life seldom is. Such unusual softness for a man to write too, it is lovely.
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A sweet and sensual write, being in love is so wonderful and you have expressed it very well here
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Great
This is a really great poem, soft and loving, with a smooth flow and gracefull form, great job, blessings John
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so sweet and touching....but at the same time it's so sad that it is just a dream....I loved it...It is so well written.... keep writing Nathan...
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BREATH TAKING
So soft and loving and just steals the heart away...sighs...for dreams of love soon become...niaish my sweet son for sharing your master piece with me
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this was brilliant! i loved every line of it tho my fav stanza was the second last one! it was really poweful! i love the emotions that are weaved into this poem... and the rhyme, just made it perfect! >.< This was mindblowing... loved it, (and i wonder what made u say i was good... have u read your piece?) keep writing kays!
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