My tendered mind is cracking within
and all my lingered thoughts are seeping out.
My head is feeling pressure.
And that one more thought crosses my mind,
and my head is in complete utter pain,
and everything explodes,
my mind scattered into the abyss.
But for now, that's all right.
Because 1000 less thoughts will allow some relaxation.
A contest entry
- Dynamite by StormGoddess.
700 points, ended June 22, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do You Believe?
Comments
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Yep, when our mind gets cluttered with the thoughts involved in daily life, we often feel like it's time to just explode. Well done. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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