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Gone

Gone...

The feeling you gave me, all those years ago...

Gone...

The reason why I married you...

Gone...

The person you were...

Gone...

But definately not forgotten...

Just wish I could find you again...

Before I find someone else...

...

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Sorry.. but thats the way I feel.. right now...

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  • catz Moderators member
    November 16
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    A bittersweet kind of poem, and the last two lines seem sad but hopeful. Those lines really touched me. But they remind me of some of the words in an old song... "it's hard to belong to someone else when the right one comes along"

    Another poignant poem

    Dee


    • Old Fool
      November 17
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      Thank you, Dee..
      And yes, along came M.. >.<
      Life can be cruel..