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B r u s h

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Soft, velvet petals,
b r u s h

against porcelain fine white skin
lingering fingers on ruby lips,
b r u s h

thoughts of desires kiss
inhaling love’s spirit,
b r u s h

rising and falling surges
skin touching in  naked arousal,
b r u s h

opening thighs velvet petals,
b r u s h

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  • Roaddog Wolf gold member
    July 25

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    You pen the

    sensations of feeling, touches brushes and sensual soft things very well, (((((shivers)))))){{{{{{shakes}}}}}}}and this one is very pretty {{{{][[[[wiggles}}}]]]]hmmmmmmmmmmm

  • Robin Candor
    June 21

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    You silly girl. I always loved your words anyway. I can imagine a man wishing a women would write something like this. Yet, for a women to write what a man would crave is excellent. The end of this write is all of it. You have been around me long enough to know that I am a gentleman, but I would love to open your thighs velvet petals in this write. BRUSH I'm sure Jen would kill me for saying this. I'm just kidding and I love you dearly as a friend on the other end of electronic media. RC


  • penman gold member
    June 15
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    Excellent

    Wonderfully crafted words. So inspiring and moving. Thank you for sharing.

  • Omg. I love the way that you can make someone move with your words. It really is different then most of the poem that I read all allpoetry and the poetry books that I read like all the time. I would love to read your poems in a book something. You should look in to that! You should be in one of my contests sometime! My favorite part is this

    against porcelain fine white skin
    lingering fingers on ruby lips,
    b r u s h

    thoughts of desires kiss
    inhaling love’s spirit,
    b r u s h

  • lostangel07 silver member
    June 15

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    Wow. Extended the meaning of brush, beautiful, love the reference to the rose. Beautiful

  • Gorgeous


  • Roaddog Wolf gold member
    June 13
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    Oh my!

    you painted a whole new meaning to the word brush, I could feel the brushing of sensual excitement that stirs within your words. Very sensual erotic and delicious write. Beautiful.

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