Daddy you were here
right from the start
Cradled me in your arms
gave me your heart
Feeding, cuddling,
holding me close
Kissing me gently
tickling my nose
Always loving me
and keeping me near
Scaring away the monsters
calming my fears
Thank you my Daddy
I could'nt love you more
Happy Father's Day
it's you I adore
Author notes
Picture above is of Jasmine our daughter taken while at the park yesterday June 12, 2008. We adopted her at birth she is our angel sent from God. I wrote this poem for her to give to her Daddy my hubby on Father's Day. Jasmine is 3 and a half years old. Her father is an amazing man we love him so much and are so lucky to have him in our lives. Happy Father's Day!
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A contest entry
- It's Fathers Day - Tell me about your Dad - Open for ALL by Florida Sunshine.
450 points, ended June 17, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything and everything by Fitz1901.
750 points, ended July 22, 2008, 59 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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JUST BEAUTIFUL
your words are just like magic dear sister...its as though sweet little Jasmine said them her self...congrats on the trophy's well earned indeed
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HOODWINKED!
Theresa,
This poem is a very nice tribute to Jasmine's father, written from her perspective, it is tender and sweet. The rhyme and flow are great and I love the top picture and border. Thanks for sharing your talent and love.
You have been Hoodwinked by your Bandit family today because WE CARE! Hope you are feeling better soon.
Brother Dennis
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Thanks Dennis your words have brought tears again to my eyes. This poem is a favorite of mine. I am the lucky one. Thanks again hugs Theresa
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Hoodwink!
Cute kid! A very sweet poem that I enjoyed completely. Such a great father's day idea. Keep the good work up
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Thanks so much I can hardly write through the tears of joy. Thanks for caring and for the wonderful comments. hugs Theresa
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This is such a beautiful heartfelt write. An absolute pleasure to read. Loved it from the first line to the last. Congratulations on the well deserved shinies
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Lovely pictures to go with this heartfelt poem. Such a sweet child! I am sure this poem brightened up your hubbies Special Day. Easy to read and understand the sentiments expressed in these lines.
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Thanks again for the wonderful comments and for bringing tears of joy too my eyes. hugs Theresa
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This is cute, just as the picture above and the pictures on the left.
The flow is just cool, and the text is so sweet. I really enjoyed it.
Happy that I've met you.
Jo
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Thanks angel for the wonderful comments no I am the lucky one for having you in my life
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Touching!
A touching and beautiful tribute to your husband and Jasmine's father. Every child should be so loved by their family. You would think that would just be a given, but as you know not everyone gets the love they deserve. What a lucky little girl to have such loving parents, and what lucky parents to have such a precious child to love! Blessings, Patty
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Thank you Patty for your heartfelt comments. We are the lucky ones
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This is very sweet and I enjoyed reading it. You have a beautiful daughter a true gift from God. Congratulations on the HM. God Bless
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Thank you
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What a cutie she is! And what a wonderful tribute - and a wonderful family relationship.
Great job on this. Congrats on the HM.
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Jasmine is so lucky to have Jason and you...
Such a beautiful and heart warming poem for Jason... I like it very much. Thanks for sharing.
You have one small typo here: "could'nt" should be "couldn't"
Keep on writing!
Annie
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This is sooooooooo Sweet. A wonderful tribute to a real Dad. My daughter is also adopted. We were ask to adopt her when her birth mother was just 3 mons preg. I was a L&D nurse and helped to deliver her. I also breast fed her with the help of a pump and a lactaide. God gives us such wonderful miracles. Love and Light Sharon
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Your daughter is adorable. And this is a beautiful poem. That's a cute idea for her to give him a poem, I bet he really enjoyed that. Thank for the reads and warm thoughts. They mean a lot.
Peace, and Blessings to you.
Lyzie
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A wonderful dedication, and so well written
nicely done.
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awwww
that's really cute. your daughter is adorable!
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Ah I love this poem, its so sweet and gentle. a great tribute to your dad. Great Job
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wow! this is such a lovely piece! great pictures to go along with this sweet poem! amazing job! keep penning! >.<
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what a nice present!
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I especially like the one with your hubby sitting on the couch and his daughter snuggled up... how cute...
Your poem is over the top good... It speaks volumes from start to finish... At first I thought it might be about you... A beautiful little girl starts the poem.
Bravo... I hope your daughter gives him this poem as her fathers day gift... I'm sure it will be treasured.
Thanks for entering it in my "Father's Day" contest ~ it was a pleasure to read ~
Best of luck to you,
Florida Sunshine
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this is so sweet Aunt Theresa
Jason will love it ... Jasmine gets prettier everytime i see her pix
what a butiful family
xxx cheeky xxx
p.s happy Fathers day Uncle Jason lol
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To the precious daughter of her mother and father, you write just like your mommy! lol very loving piece here, nice to read and enjoy as the love you all share is rare, thank you for sharing with us! good luck in the contest...
L
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Awww this was adoreable ..ans so is your daughter
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Awww well this is just as sweet as can be and look how big she is getting She is just beautiful goodluck in the contest and Happy Fathers Day Jason Hello Jasmine you are a
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