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Creeper crawl

Fingers creep,
Shadows leap.
Blood against the wall.
Vocals torn,
yellow eyed storm. 

A contest entry

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  • Gypsie Ink
    June 16, 2008
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    Creepy!

    A rage in a room...wonderful write! Thank you for your entry and Best of luck!


    • Nadala
      June 17, 2008
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      Yeah thankyou so much for the contest. It took a lot of thought