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knowing all

unknown eyes see all before the
doubt of death's call and our flight
between the rustic shadows of a humble
unpainted shack of shame

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The Road Past Hell

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    June 27, 2008
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    Beautiful imagery and metaphor...truly wonderful work...thank you for sharing...
    mystic


  • apropos
    June 13, 2008
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    this is a great take on the prompt. fabulous!