Holding the walls,
The invisible kind,
The ones that keep me locked up,
Inside my own mind,
Break this fortress,
Go crazy or,
Just get depressed.
Inside the cell,
I stick my hands through,
The invisible bars,
In which I can see you,
Smile politely or,
Grin at my face,
I don't care,
Just get me out of this place.
Swim to the surface,
Upside down?
Keep on swimming,
and feeling around,
Can't find the surface,
Run out of breath or,
Face certain death?
Break through,
The invisible walls,
Let out a cry,
Or Superior goals,
Drop the knife,
Stop the fight,
Forgive your friends or,
Live in strife?
Author notes
immyshi
A contest entry
- DARK PIF by Lost Vampyre Angel.
300 points, ended June 15, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
ooh this is preety good,
i love the rhymeing, and the dark yet different,
take on the prompt, best of luck,
kitty xxxx -
Oooh interesting take on the prompt. Nice job
Adding your comment:
