Inconsistant ignorance exploring worthless hope
Just your daily path to walk while others can not cope
With all the things you do and think you have the right to touch
When all you really care about is taking far too much.
Every time I looked at you I saw clear through your eyes
That you would never blame yourself to know that they had died.
Because of their desire to fit in along side you
You influence their every thought and strive to kill them, too.
Then in response to everything I work so hard to say
You tell me that I have no right to wish they'd be okay,
Instead your words express the way you think that you 'love life'
Incoherent arrogance contradicted when you kill life.
Author notes
This is a message to someone who doesn't even deserve it.
The last line's not meant to be better than it is.
Comments
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this is perfect so emotinal and very powerful and heartfelt
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Wow.. This is amazing my dear friend.. The last stanza is extremly powerful and even your use of the word "life" as the endings to the last two lines doesnt stop the flow.. A brilliant and thought provoking piece. x
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this is very powerful, great flow and take care
i enjoyed reading this very much
stephanie
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