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Red Rose

To the dawn she smiles and slowly opens
Born of a gentle breeze and morning light
Dark and delicate red petals dance unfolding
She reaches upward and outward in her drive for life
She is the queen of love in an exquisite floral form
She has the power to mezmorise lovers
Her sweet scent embracing and enticing
She is the love of making eyes please

Now in full bloom she seduces all who see her
Her proud body is now at its natural best
She becomes irresistible, you take her
You hold her, her seduction is complete
Her beauty draws stares of sweet awe
how can such a creature exist?
For she is Red Rose a creature of rare beauty
Then she slowly bows her head
Her petals drop gently to the floor
And she is gone

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  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    June 13, 2008
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    She bows to the glory of love

    and offers her life as a sacrifice to her temple

    Thank you.