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Season of the Rose




Somewhere there is a season,
Beyond the reach of time and space,
Beyond the thoughts of common reason-
It is a wonder of God's grace...
I'll make my way across the sky,
On rapid angel wings,
High above the world to fly,
Into the knowledge of these things,
In a field of flowers to stand,
In that paradise we now dream of,
To place a red rose in your hand-
A token of my love..

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  • Anyajoellienne
    August 20, 2008

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    Yes this is definitely beautiful piece
    worthy of its recognition
    touches my spirit
    very good


  • rhondasail
    June 24, 2008
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    ...So deserving of gold...congratulations, my friend. Peace, Rhonda


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    Congrats

    Well worthy of your price dear poetess
    Thank you for your entry
    Love,Nick


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    June 20, 2008
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    Beautifully done Jalalbad.

    Sol


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    June 13, 2008

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    Wonderful, to say the least!!!!!!!  I really enjoyed reading this lovely piece!!!!! Best of wishes in the contest!!!!!!!!!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    June 13, 2008

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    Well I can say that you can do it ..whatever you have written above is not a fantasy..you have the capacity to do it...this poem is an one example of your power..well done...


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    June 13, 2008

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    I'LL MAKE MY WAY ACROSS THE SKY,

               ON RAPID ANGEL WINGS,

    THROUGHOUT THE UNIVERSE TO FLY,

    INTO THE KNOWLEDGE OF THINGS.

    LOVELY WORDS FLOAT ACROSS THE PAGE

    LOVELY

    GOD BLESS...

  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    June 13, 2008
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    To place a rose in your hand

    a token of my love

    Thank you for your entry.

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