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Sepia Bliss

Searching eyes glare

At the semblance of sepia bliss

Whilst a long lonely road

Leads the wandering eye

Into a bleak brown world

Of endless wonder

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Lovely imagery and flow...love the last line as it hold a feeling of hope...nicely done...thank youfor sharing!