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[ Laying down being kicked down, ]

Laying down being kicked down,
you never know where you are,
I have lost my way,
feeling dead inside, feeling invisible,
know where to go but hell.

Looking back is hard to take in,
lookiing forward is dim, dark and scary,
and hurts so much you will never understand,
the truth behind the mask.

Falling falling falling,
the rain keeps falling,
there is know hope for me,
feeling like everything a mess,
not knowing what to do next.

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  • Natureluvr
    October 19
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    Great poem

    I would love to be able to put that much emotion with reality. The hope you need is within you. Keep writing.