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Angel and demon

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Tossed out from heaven,
Abandoned by hell,
A lonesome demon roam.

In the darken night,
He hides away from the life,
Then a bright light shine.

A single angel comes,
Flying down from the sky,
Sent by god himself.

She reaches out her hand,
Gives the lonesome demon a smile,
His scared face smiles back.

A single angel sent by god,
To give the lonesome demon,
Love and a new Chance.

Together they race up,
In the morning sun,
And enters pearls gate.

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  • Hebz
    August 20, 2008

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    Good inspiration image & good piece to match with the pic. Love the Background too, You're a cool artist of all trades

    Penn on!

    Thnx for entering & Best of Luck

    GloriousGift
    Heba


  • daviscth silver member
    July 14, 2008

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    Your words go great with the picture. I really like the imagery you've created. Thanks for posting in my contest.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 27, 2008

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    I like this a lot. Wonderful writing here. Your imagery was superb too. I suppose even demons have got a chance of salvation eh? Keep writing. You did well with this one.

    Darkest
    Love
    Wayne Leon


  • Puppydog gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    LOVELY!!!!

    I truly like this fantasy write!'s All are God's creatures even the most terrifying demon. 's


  • rainyday woman silver member
    June 13, 2008

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    Thank You so much for entering this contestand sharing your thoughtful piece with all of us. Good luck with your writting and with all you endeavor in life. Again thank you for enterinf.
    Cheryl


  • patsoldcat
    June 13, 2008
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    nice poem

    again i see hope of redemption in everlasting eyes.
    good luck in the contest.

  • Trapped-inside-life
    June 13, 2008

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    Really good

    Thought it was really good was drawn in. I liked the third verse.good luck with the contest. Louise x

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