Supreme Energy, fluid nothing, effervescent Om:
Structured universal life, matter’s unfolding cosmos;
Exhilarating evolution, expanding along the physicals.
Nirvana, fusion of the body, mind and soul in equipoise.
The body stays not, creation demolish not.
Material consciousness oscillates, Atma explores.
It is the eon of all embracing energies; a residuum.
The suffusion of energy, in flawless realisation of the Almighty.
The intelligent performs not, insentient live in freedom.
Awareness, initiating karma with inspiring exuberance.
Meditation the path to conscious, unconsciousness empathy.
Absolute truth, a vivacious re-allocation of consciousness.
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Comments
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extreme eloquisional verbage
expressing subdermalized noninferior expectations
good luck in the contest
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Well penned....thanks so very much
for entering! Best wishes in the contest!
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