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Day of Rest

Mine eyes have closed on their own accord
Visions of flowers and flowing rivers collide
Filling my mind with serene images
Peace fills my soul and finally I can rest...
After a long day and night of endless work.

Well, what do you think?

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  • Crazy Coconut gold member
    July 21

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    This is the kind of restful day I need after getting the baby to sleep beautiful


  • Grateful
    July 19

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    it is just amazing...you can so easily capture the essence of your thoughts...great write...keep writing...all the best..


  • LadyDementia gold member
    June 29

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    Hope your getting plenty of it hunni Beautifully penned piece...keep it flowing hun


  • Angelic Princess21
    June 19

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    really good write sis.. i wish i could actually sleep. i sleep but i dont feel rested.. keep up the good work sweetie i love you and miss you lots...


  • yogi59
    June 14
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    After a long tiring day the peace one enjoys is a wonderful sleep.Well potrayed in simple words.

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