Crimson red, the admirable sky wraps around
what I believe to be
THE WORLD
Anything but graceful, the polluted clouds take over my emotions
and I get swallowed into the bitterness
strangely feeling that I'm home
Author notes
The sky here is always like that and I love to watch it.
A contest entry
- SUNRISE by Swan song.
600 points, ended June 14, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sunset Prompt by xXxCaipirinhaxXx.
450 points, ended June 16, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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good job. short but good.
good luck with my judgeing. -
Very good and very different You have a creative mind and smooth flow Keep it up and thank you for entering
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Nice take on the picture. Not keen on the word crimson, but the rest is a neat read. Good luck.
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