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Fuck Hope

Fuck Hope

Fuck the tiny seeds

that bury themselves deep down

waiting for one moment

one ray of light

to sprout little seedlings

little buds

false positives

gleefully stomped

beneath muddy boots

saved so long for something good

crushed again and again

reburied

rehidden

beneath the muttering

fidgity hands

Fuck love

and trying to go on

fuck attempts at the right thing

always broken

always dying

never giving up

fuck change

FUCK HOPE.

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Written June 5, 2008
I felt like crap, after getting my heart trampled all over again... just pissed it keeps happening, I cant kill it, cant get numb... thus this crude monstrosity was born

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  • JBudRos
    August 22, 2008
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    Sweetie

    I promise to grow you a beautiful Garden Pyragus...remember the world thinks your Gorgeous!!


  • K-9
    June 16, 2008

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    It is okay to feel bad about mistakes you've made, but learn from them. Some things cannot be made right and opportunities missed are sometimes lost forever. But that doesn't mean that other possibilities won't present themselves. To see which road your dreams are down, you have to be looking forward. If you are only looking backward, you will only see what you might have had and not what you can have. Never give up hope.
    ~woof


  • mshairi
    June 16, 2008
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    aw gal,whats going on in your life?things cant be that bad,the poem expresses saddness unequeled,pain and suffering...but dont give up on life and love and hope....


  • Haley-baby1
    June 13, 2008

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    this is very pessimistic
    but i can't say i never wrote anything similar
    so basically, your flowers are being stepped on and you're damn sick of it?
    i understand.