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My Destination

Looking at the road
                in head of me
I see the things that I truly fear
Lost in the cloud that is my life,
I'm unable to alter my future

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I would love to change my present to better my future.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Forks yet to come can change your furture...deeply felt in brevity...strong emotions felt in your words...nicely done...thank you for sharing!


  • xXcrimsontearsXx
    June 24, 2008

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    jaded teardrop

    this is a really good poem. I know a lot of people, myself included, that wish they could change their present to better their future... good job. changing your future can be hard to do...