I sat and read a bit today
Happy and mellow turned a different way
Sad and full of so many tears
No need to cry no use to fear
Worrying myself to a point of no return
Working hard to keep my heart warm
Crying impatiently for this to end
Trying my best to rid of the "emo" trend
Scurried off to hide in my hole today
I found no reason for life, no use to stay
Clear liquid deliusious tears
Happiness in death thats so near
Repulsed by my own decisions today
In this life I walk the other way
Author notes
Option 3
Sorry if its not to good.. I havent been able to write lately and outta no where I started to cry.. I just gave up a bit while trying....
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690 points, ended June 20, 2008, 34 entries
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haha brilliant poem. I love the one line ""emo" trend" brilliant use of words. And great job rhyming. I hope to read more from you.
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thank you so much for your comments
I hope to have your imput on more of my poems =D
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Oh honey my heart breaks for you
To free oneself of sorrows oe must make their thoughts ones of enjoyment and love . Dont listen to the mind when it wants to go astray and mess up your day . Just say no and turn to something that makes you feel good and push old misery away . Believe me I do this often for if I listened to my thoughts all the time I would climb the walls
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I really wasnt trying to think of negative with this
i really just started crying I had no idea why and I still dont.. I was just miserable
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very nice i like it alot!
"Trying my best to rid of the "emo" trend"
"emo" trend" nice imagery
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oh hunn this poem was still very beautiful
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very good poem. genuine display of emotion.
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