Through stormy clouds and waters dark
I traveled in the night
and lost myself within the mist
while no one
heard my plight
the wooden railings chipped away
the floorboards sank in vain
without my sight
to aid the fight
I failed to learn your name
then finally when all was done
you stood there all in white
you swept the air
with fingers bare
and wound my clock up tight.
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I love the rhyme it was so easy and smooth upon the tongue. The words painted a picture that left me breathless. Thank you for entering my contest but I do need to ask you to put "I am wonderful" in your AN as per the rules. Thank you for sharing this with us and Good luck in my contest
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whoops! haha,guess i missed that part!
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You did an amazing job with this. So fluent and impressive. I loved reading this because this is how I write my rhymed poetry. I would argue this is much better than mine though
But I write with the same type of meter. This is brilliantly amazing. I think that I am going to have to bookmark this.
Much Love
Carrie
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oh, beautiful...your poetry gets better and better. I think you are really advancing...good for you
I really love this 
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