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Native Hawaiian song

Ancient Native Hawaiian song
Pulsed in my dream
A rhythmic pounding

I vividly remember the dream
Such powerful words
Although I did not understand the meaning

It was more than I could handle
A great power held me there
Long enough to make me aware

Prayers cast out from the distant islands
To me form some where
Who knows me there?

I felt the power
Flowing inside of me
Perhaps of words that do not exist now

Wilikia, monao woasot
The words rolled by
So many of them

I cannot remember them all
I do not even know if they are being used any more
They came on me like the tides of an ancient song

Haunting me with the words
Of a wahine warrior
Now I am very lost in this power

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  • StarEyes
    June 13, 2008

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    Jon,

    Hmmmmm, this is interesting, and really has my mind reeling this morning. WOW! Many different thoughts and images, and yet, leaves me wondering about many things.

    I will have to IM you about what I am talking about. Dont have time right now, as I have to start getting things ready for my son's graduation. You did a great job on this one!

    and love my friend


    Nyetta