Sophisticated
passion and intelligence
equals eloquence
Author notes
For Mairi Bheag
A contest entry
- Gentlemen, It Is Time To Choose.... by Dalaney.
925 points, ended July 4, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You could not have chosen a more deserving poet. She is my all time Fav. Thank you for entering. Love, Lane


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I don't like haiku ... i prefer not to mesh japanese syntax and diction with English, and so I don't usually look at haiku, but prefer the Cinquain, however, here, is a nice work, without the usual clumsy, choppy stuff that passes for haiku around here ...
i like the way it flows, the definition of eloquence, and just generally enjoyed the heck out of this one, Bill
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