Nobody feels what I am feeling today
just letting the 'wind' have its sway
I've captured the market in my own way
with succulent sensation's interplay.
This quietness I feel is mighty deep
I've haven't left once to steal a peep
Just being surrounded in 'pause' sweep
dangling memories; the good ones to keep.
No one 'feels' it the way that I do.
Something inside tells me that its true
It's light shades from feeling blue
It's gliding along happy; loves avenue.
Like a white swan in motionless water drills
Having captured the mountains; now the hills
Needing no encumbrances, not searching frills
feeling an absence of everything that makes ill.
A contest entry
- A Peaceful Easy Feeling by davidwright.
600 points, ended June 15, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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An interesting presentation. Lotsa good rhyme here.
Thanks for the entry and happy trails -
a good poem, ah yes, to be gliding along the smiles that live in love's avenue, to feel serenity and joy at being in the world.
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Peace that shields...yes, all is well lol or, we'll say its s
lol
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