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Life of the Rose

A SINGLE ROSE HE GAVE TO ME
AS TIME PASSED AWAY
IT BEGAN TO DIE
SO DID THE LOVE
WE BOTH FELT
ONCE UPON A NIGHT
WE HOLD EACH OTHER PRETENDING
THAT OUR LOVE HASN'T WILTED AWAY
LIKE THE LIFE OF THE ROSE
THAT HE ONCE GAVE TO ME
TWENTY TWO YEARS AGO AND MAYBE A DAY
WITH TWO KIDS NOW SHOWING US THE WAY
HOLD ME TIGHT
I REALLY DON'T WANT TO FIGHT
NOT ON THIS COLD AND LONELY NIGHT
HOW MUCH LONGER WILL I PRETEND
THAT MY ROSE HAS LIFE
PLEASE HOLD ME FOREVER A THEN ANOTHER NIGHT
LETS NOT BE CRUSHED BY A CHAPTER IN BOOK
CUZ THATS JUST HOW MY ROSE SEEN THE END

Author notes

Sorry about that caps wasn't looking while typing once again.... I don't feel like changing it right now I might before the contest closes. Hopefully it only another bump in the road of life, but who knows?

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  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    June 13, 2008

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    I am sure that rose lives deep in your heart

    and in his too

    caress it with love, it may bloom again.

    Thank you