An avalanche of snickering madness leads the pack,
while doe-eyed love skips through flowers not far behind:
yawning boredom comes a close third stumbling to the block
as thoughts all intertwine and become one huge massacre!
Darkness seems to prevail creeping through shadows of hate
tempting purity with false promises of sin behind each bush;
monotony has crept into a corner and fazed out the world.
Black compliments through teeth dripping with venom
making innocence miss a beat and listen with frowns.
Obscurity explodes shredding all as the crumbling dust becomes part of the night
Author notes
Your prompt: Explosions of the mind
10 lines only
Darkness almost ALWAYS wins in my mind!
A contest entry
- Dynamite by StormGoddess.
700 points, ended June 22, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well worth the Gold trophy. As usual your dark side produces some stunning pictures and creates a r ange of conflicting emotion.
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An deserved win on an amazing write.. congrats hun ...
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Oooh, dark, but so well put. Definitely a good take on the prompt. Love where your mind went with this one. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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This is very good. I love the race bit, I could imagine all this taking place in the mind..Well done
**Ktulu Blackwolfe**
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