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Deeper than Skin

Beauty, Beautiful
  these words they say
but what make us beautiful
apperance, personality, or love
Why do you love
Because she's beautiful?
That's what some say
But what do they know
Do they know what beauty is
Can they see that deep into the soul
But your the most beautiful thing
  to me
you don't believe me,
you're only looking skin deep
How do I make you see
Listen to me
I don't love you
Becaues your beautiful
Your beautiful because your loved
Now do you see what I see?

Author notes

based off quote
You don't love a woman,
because she is beautiful,
but she is beautiful, because you love her....

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 15, 2008

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    Hunn..nicely made verse touching the togetherness of life showing the beauty of life...well done..thank you so much for entering my contest.....


  • HeartBr8ker
    June 14, 2008

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    This is really good. Beauty is more than looks. I know cause I am a beautiful person and I'm freakin ugly...


    • PhoenixRose
      June 14, 2008
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      well then...that's not nice...the calling your self ugly part...and you don't look it from what i can see of the pic...and thanks for the points bubba