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A sweet blush

 

  The Daughter of moonlight bathes 

  upon earth's veranda of Maui.

  Soft sea breezes lusciously sing 

  mystic songs of Pacific Island beauty.

 

  Guitar strings and seductive harmonies

  relax and soothe the soul to peace. 

  Fragrant plumeria and coconut scents

  cast it's surrender spell potently.

 

  Presenting you a sip

  of clear moonlight tranquility.

  A tender hand extended

  asks  yearning feminine request.

 

  Will you kind sir

  share your dance with me.

  A sweet blush cast

  enchants graciously.

 

 

 

   

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Contest prompt:A Peaceful Easy Feeling
Let me hear about quiet nights, swaying palms or a refreshing glass of wine on the veranda.

Dearest Poet, I agree, for we in Wa. State have labelled
this month in Washington State, June-uary.
and I too..have closed my tender eyes and see in sight
the memories of Mauii and cool hawaiian breeze!
A perfect night for soft gentle music and soulful
sweet dancing.

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  • davidwright silver member
    June 15, 2008

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    I can hear the ukeleles and see the grass skirts sway. Very lovely write. Thanks for the entry and happy trails


  • Lucy.
    June 13, 2008

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    Beautifully sweet. A lovely write for the prompt. Well done and good luck in the contest.


  • faderman1959
    June 13, 2008

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    Beautifully done! I completely loved the feel of this! I didn't want it to end.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 13, 2008

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    Wow!

    very serene! I love the ease at which you pen these fantastic image-filled pieces! Talent overflows within
    you poetess!