"Don't they envy us, Ma?"
"Yes, dear; while they are
busy doing the divorce dance,
we're into romance, with a
side order of family love,
they've got nothing on us."
A contest entry
- YOU THINK YOU ARE HIP TO LOVING LARGE? 30 words - #85- by Roaddog Wolf.
475 points, ended June 23, 2008, 9 entries
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don't think that have divorces in the world of hippos,we don't have anything on them, good write thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
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Just makes me smile - loved the "into romance with a side order of family love." Great title too!
Marlene -
that's big love indeed - way to go!
I liked the interaction of the characters
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Thanks, I was wondering how to approach it hahaha lol
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the jiggerty hop in the divorce shop - a good piece that smiles with traditional family life. would you like fries with that?
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Yes, a plenty hahaha you have me cracking up here hahahaha your trademark lol
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