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My Heart's Song

Glimpses across the way
glances within dreams
flashes of a face hidden,
subtle recognition,
gentle tugs upon my heart strings
deep burning sensations,
of a heart yearning,
while the heart murmurs soft whispers
of longing,
bidden

Restricted of life's simple joys
sight,
sound,
taste,
touch,
a fair heart desiring
my one true love
my doppelganger and confidant

Discreet whispers of promises
loyalty,
devotion,
and more,
two beseeching hearts
bound within love's cruelty,
and eternal tug-a-war

Though for now our assemblage
is only within dreams
and this cold white screen,
my heart swells with happiness
with every depiction of my hopes,
wishes, and yearnings

Of my love, soul mate,
your ever attentive eyes of sunrise brown
enticing,
enchanting,
ensnaring my character
with their inclinations of true happiness
and your immortal love, and devotion

In so short a time you've invaded my mind,
heart, body, and soul,
leaving your mark upon me
rendering my mind useless but for thoughts of you,
and my body desires only that which it feels is true,
that my love is my never ending,
eternal, undying, 
love for you

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  • individuality gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    a good smiling song that flutters love into air with cool wonder and generous movement, let the dance of love swirl into hearts as the songs roll by.


  • Shaded DevilFox gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    Beautiful

    I think that we all play a game like this in our minds. We have a picture of our perfect soul mate but it never becomes clear until we actualy meet them. Once we do our lives are never the same...bravo

  • Eusebius
    June 13, 2008

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    bravo

    Ah, a soulful song of love...much like a meditaion upon love and the beloved... very deftly penned here. I liked it a ton and a half! bravo... bravo... bravo..