I came to him in the dark of night,
his eyes hooded with sleep
tried to pierce the dark surrounding him,
which is where I lingered.
The dark with which had become my prison
was once my nightmare,
trapped and drifting in the veils of time and space,
I heard his voice like a whisper on the wind.
So beckoning, so siren,
calling to the deepest sense of what I am,
to what I was missing, what I lacked,
sensation of feeling;
sights, his eyes, shone with the rivers of his soul,
sound, a voice soothing,
scents, his life blood, so intoxicating,
touch, when we embraced, the warmth of his body, lips,
so alive and captivating,
He received the blessing of the night,
tor, to come to the night was good and true,
for, I upheld him with my being,
fiving to him all that I am and will be.
What was once trapped within humanity
now knew no bounds,
strong as stone, Silent as the wind,
more tempting than the temptress herself.
And through his eyes, those deep pools of sensation, I saw it all,
It was he, who made the night captivating,
with him I found a dawn of radiance,
he who is my confidante, my solace, my night……
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A contest entry
- Vampire Poems! by hazeleyedfreak.
600 points, ended August 30, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Come all Vampire lovers by okadadokie.
650 points, ended August 3, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Lovely...............Great job.
~Oka/KC -
Awe
I enjoyed this alot. I love how you incoporated many feelings that although simlier, feel completly different. My favorite lines were,
So beckoning, so siren,
calling to the deepest sense of what I am,
to what I was missing, what I lacked,
sensation of feeling;
Thank you for entering and Good Luck!! -
a good poem, dark and turning with shadows that flow smoothly throughout the night's realm, love gathers the stars and waits for time.
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